Ms Meyer endeavours to move the storyline along, but at a very slow pace. She tends to spend a very long time, building up her dramatic scenes, which can tend to get a little boring. Ms Meyer still writes like a beginning author and whilst I enjoyed the concept of the storyline, there certainly was room for tightening things up a little.
The driving force to getting the story finished was to move Edward back into it. However, while he is absent Bella gets the opportunity to grow her friendship with Jacob where action of a different sort emerges.
I enjoyed the concepts and ideas involved in this story. It is entertaining. (
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The driving force to getting the story finished was to move Edward back into it. However, while he is absent Bella gets the opportunity to grow her friendship with Jacob where action of a different sort emerges.
I enjoyed the concepts and ideas involved in this story. It is entertaining. (
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